8/6/08

Synopsis

In the world of publishing novels, you almost never send your manuscript to a publishing house uninvited. That is called an unsolicited submission, and almost nobody accepts them. Send your manuscript to, say, Tor, and, guess what, into the slush pile it goes, never to be read.

Instead, you have to query publishers. A query is a small packet containing a brief query letter, a short bio, two or three sample chapters (usually, chapters one through three) and a synopsis of your novel. So I worked on the synopsis of my novel all day today. Sheer tedium. I had seven pages of single spaced writing. Then I did some research on writing a synopsis and discovered that, in general, a book synopsis should never, ever be longer than seven double spaced pages. Preferably, you want 1 page per 50,000 words. Holy crap!

So I went back to the drawing board and wrote a much shorter synopsis. It came in at about 4 double spaced pages. Basically, the synopsis needs to answer, in as few words as possible, these questions:
  • What's the setting?
  • What's the hook?
  • What's the tone of the story? That is, its feel, its authorial voice, its approach to the story. Is this a light-hearted book, a dark book, or a funny book?
  • Who are the main characters?
  • What are their motivations?
  • What are the key scenes?
  • What is the prime conflict?
  • What are the main characters' blackest moments?
  • What is the main character's big crisis?
  • What is the story's climax?
So you send the query packet to every publisher under the sun, and if they are interested in reading the full manuscript, they will reply and request it. Only then do you send the full manuscript. Once you send the manuscript, you sit back and wait, wait, wait. I wrote a novel some years ago that sat at a publisher for almost an entire year, before they returned it to me. I received it back all beat up and scribbled on and grungy. They liked it very much, they said, and passed it around the office to be read by one and all, but they ultimately decided not to publish it. Nice. That book was called The Deep Water, and it is never coming to a Barnes and Noble near you.

2 comments:

shack said...

First) Never say never. Some day when you're rolling in the green and your publisher is hounding you for a new manuscript and you've been too busy sitting by the pool drinking rum punch swizzles, you can pull out Deep Water, dust it off and send it to your publisher who will be over joyed because he knows that your adoring fans will buy anything with your name on it.

Second) Oh, that was it.

Jeffrey Miller said...

Deep Water needs major rewriting, is the thing. But you never know. I still recall it fondly. I should say, I recall the characters and situations fondly. I do not recall the crude and unpolished prose fondly.