So the second revision is complete. I found myself increasingly frustrated with the manuscript this time. The prose in places sounded rough, and no matter how much I fiddled with it, I was never satisfied. It is probably because I need to step back from the material for a little while.
Anyway, the text got pared down a bit this time. 93,097 words. Mostly, the removal of redundancies, adverbs, excess words, etc.
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Will Lisa be the only guinea pig? Are you taking applications? I need something good to read. I don't want to read any more of the Twilight books...
Lisa read the first draft. Amber is currently reading the second draft. I am already working on the third draft. Perhaps you can read it when I am done.
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